You are great at drawing the anatomy and designing her clothes.
She has a great position or pose and it adds up to her fierce personality.
You made the hairstyle simple yet pleasing and the shading of her eyes are remarkable.
In a way, your artwork attracts viewers because it's colors match with each other; the skin tone, clothing, hair color, lettering and armory.

Everything is well-detailed and magnificent; from head to toe, background to the drawing and coloring.

It is, without a doubt, beautiful. And I could not see why viewers would not like it.

Good job, Wonderful, Awesome!